EZEYES-
I HATE SNEEKY GUYS-
I BUST FROM HEATED NINES-
LEAVING YOU SLEEPY EYED-
I KEEP THE PIES-
THAT MEANS ALL CHEDDAR-
YOU GET NOTHING BETTER-
BUT RAINED ON LIKE AND UMBRELLA-
EZEYES-
I HATE SNEEKY GUYS-
I BUST FROM HEATED NINES-
LEAVING YOU SLEEPY EYED-
I KEEP THE PIES-
THAT MEANS ALL CHEDDAR-
YOU GET NOTHING BETTER-
BUT RAINED ON LIKE AND UMBRELLA-
yo to be on the real, that wasnt great, for one it was real short.....it had no flow, Vocab was very basic, you got no multi's nothing...it might just be a taste.....but come on step it up....peace
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OK I GOT YOUOriginally Posted by Mixtape
You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
this piece was real short....it rhymed, but i dont understand what the point of it was
this piece was real short....it rhymed, but i dont understand what the point of it was. make it longer and expand on that shit and make a story outta iy. keep elevatin
short as hell, but to the point, ok but prolly could elevate alot!!
Needs a topic or something... I mean if you added 2 more bars this would be a good feature verse. meaning if you feature on one of them "i'm live" tracks, you could put this shit and scream it like you're Sticky Fingaz or something
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