The World We Live In

[Hybrid]

The World We Live In

Definitions all lost in the minds of the youth’s eyes
Sacred acts taken lightly as teenage pregnancies rise
Condemnation for expression of thoughts, wicked and true
Humanity lost as we segregate the hopeless, sick and few
Defamation as we march into the blight years of our existence
Information withheld from the right thinkers of the resistance
Patience a virtue? Hardly as we rush for success in our life
From 4 to 24 years old we’re in school for a quarter of our life
Radical approaches always hushed as to not alerted others
If cloning wasn’t debated, then what would inspire mothers?
To give up their jobs, go home to take care of the family
Men will always rule the world and doom us to insanity
Testosterone the major factor for the causes of wars
From all shit like land, countries, freedom and whores
Renegade fighters always made out to be the villains
People are dieing of starvation and others have millions
A president shouldn’t rule like a King but instead represent
The nation for its values and always act reasonably decent
Of coarse retaliation is expected but at what cost?
Killing for revenge only adds more lives that are lost.







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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=149487
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1747138

[snakeyes]

Yo, this was a good thread to let people know what us, humanity is doing to each and specially mother earth. I feel you though. Each ryme here was set up towards your own understanding, but I had a blast reading it. Good shit dog.

[>Inertia>]

Yea..this was a very 'current' topic..the world's woes. Your vocab was excellent..no gripes there. The whole thing flowed pretty well..a few spots were a little bit sketchy, but that's just me being picky. I could feel the emotion in this, as it seemed more like personal musings than anything else. Overall, this was a pretty good piece, and I enjoyed reading it.

[Hybrid]

UP- Thanx for the feedback much appreciated, please reply and drop links and i'll reply to anything.

peace

[Magic101]

deep yo
hot long but hot

[Hybrid]

UP- Please drop links.

[NovA - N.E.T]

Erm wel ye it was good a found t a bi ard 2 follow n all bu das jus probl me bein a dunce bu ye apart from da good drop