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    Poetic mask

    I absorb the hemoglobin from my mutilations and sadistic innovations,
    My creations of pessimistic complications leave vaginal tissue lacerated,
    My issues of repudiated morality leave a reality corrupted and torn,
    Out of my mothers stomach,I errupted,nothing was born except misery,
    Using energy drawn from a memory infected with infrastapedial perception,
    I lay myself to sin an imperfected bacterial conception of amelioration..
    Depression led to a sensastion derived from intestinal prolapse and secretion.
    Androgynal phoenician expanded as anginal accretion and abdominal excretion,
    The depletion of happyness penetrated verisimilitude depictions of mortality.
    The inquietude of contradictions became a formality of my own pain and fear,
    The rain of tears swiftly left me slain amongst my piers;Rhyme was an escape,
    For every time i was alone,i was raped by Phsycotic vocabulary and imagination.
    My errotic constabulary of tribulation Opened doors to hidden meaning,
    But the metaphors were ridden with intervening poors of forbidden convening.
    Leaning on my pile of lyrics i met necrophile spirits claiming me as i died,
    And explaining to me,as i cried,they told me the answers to the universe..
    But cancers perverse swiftly were produced,and as I lay seduced,i passed.
    And standing before god,I took off this poetic mask..

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    Kitten
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    Damn man. This was some good shit. Hell, I don't even know what half of those words mean, but I loved the concept. I really don't see anything wrong with it. The piece has meaning an intellect. Keep up this good shit. I wouldn't mind reading more of your work.

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