10-12 linesAnything above will be dq'd
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g'luck
10-12 linesAnything above will be dq'd
check in immedailty due in 40 minutes after check in...
g'luck
checking in i'll be done soon......................
check in good luck ima start keying you spit first
My rhymes "blow up" like "block busters" while yours "rented"
"liquid content has 3,000 post" but still show "discontented"
ya rhymes is "clear" as "Liquid" i eaze through them like "fluid"
"check" ya rhymes cuase i'm "running" pass you like "nike just do it"
if you were "god's gift" then he wouldn't sent his "jesus" our "savior"
i'll be ya "redeemer" but you got to get some one to "save ya"
your just another newb getting tossed, "burn" you out like "exhaust"
that collab "Imperfection" was weak no wonder you "feeling lost"
"Im A Poet Nothing More Nothing Less" well you show no "success"
your a easy win like a blind man playing chess i know you in stress
i'ma leave you "bleeding" in your own "scripture" "The Angles Tear"
let's have a "prayer" before i win this "queer" in his eyes i see fear
This queer is laughter, I smashed him back to the future, just to say I killed him here and after...
I'm near an actor, this dudes hiding his cowardess, but he's scared cause obviously frear's a factor...
I'll sit here, let this idiot spit, cause no matter what Liquid will come up with the wittiest shyt...
This bar is filler, but already hit harder than anything you dropped, please everybody pity him fit...
What are you typing bongs?! this fat-ass chomps at plates so much we consider it biting songs...
Your light is on while you sleep, and you can't create good material, so you only writing wrong...
I'm dropping yours, it's like I got weed in my shoe, the way I'm socking herbs..
With a butcher's knife and my middle fingers thrown up, this dude couldn't 'kill 2 mocking birds...
competitor slain,when this guy sucks Dicks is the only time somebody said he gave brain...
Don't worry, even if you lose to me with those 'magic bullets' you got, you'll still have kennedy's fame..
now im done killin this bitch .like an annoying booger i pick.. you flick you and your done...
never to be seen again.. becuase ive just ripped you not outta hate but for fun...
ok both verses has been posted so let the voting begin.
Break down Liquid
This queer is laughter, I smashed him back to the future, just to say I killed him here and after...
I'm near an actor, this dudes hiding his cowardess, but he's scared cause obviously frear's a factor...
Basic opener wasnt dat hard nice wordplay tho
I'll sit here, let this idiot spit, cause no matter what Liquid will come up with the wittiest shyt...
This bar is filler, but already hit harder than anything you dropped, please everybody pity him fit...
Another decent punch cudve come harder
What are you typing bongs?! this fat-ass chomps at plates so much we consider it biting songs...
Your light is on while you sleep, and you can't create good material, so you only writing wrong...
This was harder was feelin it nice flow aswell
I'm dropping yours, it's like I got weed in my shoe, the way I'm socking herbs..
With a butcher's knife and my middle fingers thrown up, this dude couldn't 'kill 2 mocking birds...
was a good punch cudve made it a bit better flow was ok
competitor slain,when this guy sucks Dicks is the only time somebody said he gave brain...
Don't worry, even if you lose to me with those 'magic bullets' you got, you'll still have kennedy's fame..
Wasnt feelin it didnt get it either
now im done killin this bitch .like an annoying booger i pick.. you flick you and your done...
never to be seen again.. becuase ive just ripped you not outta hate but for fun...
Ok this was an ill finsher nice flow and rhyme hit hard aswell
Boogie
My rhymes "blow up" like "block busters" while yours "rented"
"liquid content has 3,000 post" but still show "discontented"
LMFAO nice opener dawg good flow and hit hard
ya rhymes is "clear" as "Liquid" i eaze through them like "fluid"
"check" ya rhymes cuase i'm "running" pass you like "nike just do it"
weak flow was all fucked up here was an ok personal tho
if you were "god's gift" then he wouldn't sent his "jesus" our "savior"
i'll be ya "redeemer" but you got to get some one to "save ya"
Pretty hot was fellin t the flow wasnt grea but the punch was good
your just another newb getting tossed, "burn" you out like "exhaust"
that collab "Imperfection" was weak no wonder you "feeling lost"
Hard personal but i dont tink he's a newb he been a around still a good punch tho nice flow 2
"Im A Poet Nothing More Nothing Less" well you show no "success"
your a easy win like a blind man playing chess i know you in stress
Decent
i'ma leave you "bleeding" in your own "scripture" "The Angles Tear"
let's have a "prayer" before i win this "queer" in his eyes i see fear
Another ill finsher liked the flow wordplay was excellent
This battle wasnt that close i think boogie took it punches were about the same but boogie came with more personals and his wordplay was better liquids lines looked streched.
Overall vote Boogie
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liquid
better wordplay shit was nice,u also had a dope structure,ur flow was ight,and u had some nice punches,ur opener was whack but u did have a nice closer...so yeah you had nice wordplay and punches
b o o g i e
u had punches but no they werent that hard,yes u had a good structure,and ur flow was okay,u had a decent opener...and ur closer which wasnt great,the only thing i can really say good about your verse was that u had structure,and personals...
overall liquid content gets my vote...boogie had peronals and a good structure,but liquid had good wordplay,punches,and a nice structure also...so i give this to him
v/liquid
AI
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Close battle. Boogie had good punches, personals and a good structure, flow was quite good. Liquid Content had good multies, hard punches but the lines were a bit streched. Both had good closers and good verses but i felt that liquid just to this.
V/Liquid Content
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ok upping sorry i can't vote for any of ya'll battles but i'm sure liquid can.
overall liquid gets it with punches and wordplay.. boogie had some personals and some decent structure.. but liquid also had good structur so it was a tie there.. no hate and props to both
Wun~
both of you hit these battles up honestly cause they been slept on forever and i wanna start a new one.. thanks
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=144935
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=144564
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=144189
Hmmm..
Boogie - Not badd, some was nice. Punches were weak tho...flow was good, vocab was too. I didnt like the "***" idea, cuz it got hard to read. But overall, 6/10.
Liquid - ^ Same. Ur best was definetly ur opener n closure, hit hard wit personals. Overall, 7/10.
Vote - Liquid.
Good Luck Fellas.
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On Vacation, Bitches.
boogie had some good stuff,at the beginning but got off track,good wordplay,some wat punch lines.
but overall liquid had good lines,structure,and was alittle better.
favorite lines=
"This queer is laughter, I smashed him back to the future, just to say I killed him here and after...
I'm near an actor, this dudes hiding his cowardess, but he's scared cause obviously frear's a factor..."
Boogie - not bad but not hard enough with the punches. Not stand out lines alough you improved towards the end. Work on your starts and get some harder puncehed in there.
Sirius - you won this on your punches and you answered back on his shit. nothing special but won it for you.
Vote/ Sirius
Return the favour and vote on my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=143876
uppin .....................................3x will return the favor one more vote...
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