10 lines blind spit due 20 in mins after you check in..............
Liquid Content
<~*1*~>
10 lines blind spit due 20 in mins after you check in..............
"i got a new toy that will burn a hater,and put a red dot in his eye like the fucking terminater"
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this is my check in good luck son
"i got a new toy that will burn a hater,and put a red dot in his eye like the fucking terminater"
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Your content is liquid, so i've spilled it.
you couldnt have a solid verse,if bob built it..
i destroy wannabes's who will be never be.
you should be invisable content cuz u'll never see..
i can beat u with 10 lines of blah blah blah.
i read your poets and they made me say HA HA HA..
face it your faceless no thought so save it, u've been beat.
how can it be? do the math "BATTLE+<~*1*~>=deafeat..
you cant out do me,or do me in N' i aint talkin gay shit.
so save your 10 lines for some other newbie,cuz here u'll just waste it..
"i got a new toy that will burn a hater,and put a red dot in his eye like the fucking terminater"
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check i really aint got time for this so fuck it here is some wack shit for a noob
i'll pick you up and puncture a hole through you like a voodoo doll
blood jus falls downstream and gushs out as if it were Niagra Falls
I spit bars dat Golden Corral and Shoney's haven't even probably carried
shoveling dirt on your computer it's your final resting place to get buried
your pad and pen nigga go ahead jus set it on da ground
even though i'm on my computer I'm still gonna shut it down
my lyrics have you running around in circles like a dog chasing it's tail
home boi in yo mind keep thinking i'm a test to ace and you gonna fail
bash-n-hit, wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch
Ya lack-the-wits, my voice boomin like I'm clappin-clips
well guys i didnt think this was too strong a battle, both ould have used some stronger punches and brought some wit to the match... oh well... someone has to win... hmm...
<~*1*~>... i thought your verse had a touch too much self glor, like not enought hitting at the opponent, plus your set ups and delivery of the punches could have been done stronger... that blah blah, ha ha bar was wack....
Liquid... hmm your verse wasnt much better.... you did have better wordplay tho... and you executed the punches a bit better, overall creating a more solid hit with them.... still not good tho....
v/liquid
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Well this battle was pretty weak.....
*1*- you really need to work on your punches nothin hit. I don't think anything even came close to hitting LOL. You did a little self glorification also and thats not good in the front lines leave you self glory in the OMs iight!!!!
LC- You could have came harder but at least you had some shit that hit. You get my vote cuz you were better all around.
V/ Liquid Content
1 - Your flow wasnt bad...there wasnt anything really wrong with that, your vocab was pretty basic....cmon now...blah blah blah-ha ha ha? wasnt feelin that, you had a few multis in there though which was nice, you had one AIiight punch which was the very first line, but after that you didnt have any solid punches...work on you vocab and your punches...and if all else fails use a lot of multis
Liquid-your flow was nice, your vocab was pretty good for the most part, the part that threw me off was the tail-fail lol its all good tho, punches-i thought u had some decent ones, nothing quotable tho. Nice multis at the end too.
Vote: Liquid for better punches and vocab
Plz hit my battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=144405
1-u did ok for a newb but elevate on ya punches and make them more witty and slick....like try sayen things to make ppl laugh at the opponent....
liquid-ok verse even tho i can tell u didnt really try cuz ive seen much betta....but u had some ok punches in there so my vote goes to u
vote/liquid
plz return the fava and vote on my battle against eye sea or phatinum thx 1
uppin
uppin....................................will return the favor..
well guys i didnt think this was too strong a battle, both ould have used some stronger punches and brought some wit to the match... oh well... someone has to win... hmm...
<~*1*~>... i thought your verse had a touch too much self glor, like not enought hitting at the opponent, plus your set ups and delivery of the punches could have been done stronger... that blah blah, ha ha bar was wack....
Liquid... hmm your verse wasnt much better.... you did have better wordplay tho... and you executed the punches a bit better, overall creating a more solid hit with them.... still not good tho....
v/liquid
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word....
liquid coulda came harder tho the niagra line was played and weak word
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1-ya flow was aight structure was good, you had some multies but i though you really only had like one good punch, ya vocab was pretty basic
Liquid- flow was nice, vocab was good you had better punches and multies
you pretty much won this with better punches and vocab
V/ Liquid cause he had better punches
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