philosopha vs dreamer
philosopha vs dreamer
10 lines 20 minutes lets go you know the rules .................................................. .........
aight checkin in
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Yo
Dreamer whereva u from u not mutual respected
You a disease i only could know u if i studied immunogenetics
u losin in seconds, losin and wreckless, put ya moves on checklists
Think twice in this battle before ya stupidity check ya
its kinda hard to distinquish my religion
Cause we two different categories like English and hyroglyphics
Ya style is missin, compared to my complex system of words
im rippin with urge, till im dead in a hearse, spit with a curse
to these illiterite critics Dreamer's kidden,
all i hear is repetitive lyrics of the theories of u irrelevent niggas
Clown
Ya turn
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my bad my computer shut down im puttin my verse up now.....................
''Nas is that nigga greatest lyricist of all time and hes a thug, born and bred in the streets of Queens Bridge that nigga is thug" Quoted By Philosopha
Dude change ya psychology, be a man ya own emcee
just came to rb, and already a dick ridin philosphy
i read ya lines they played and boring like the cubic square
sixteen year old kid already hanging on nuts like pubic hair
this cats say hes from Baltimore or is it Queens New York
i thought he could offer more, than just how to chew pork
cant trust the dude everything he writes is just lies spit
this homo must think hes Kalise cause he stays on nas dick
this dude cant defend himself, hes young his quarrels weak
so he decides to put nuts in his mouth like a squarrels cheek
o damn dawg i gotta give it to u that was hard it must took u all day to find that quote of mine lol
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Easy battle...but first i gotta give props t o Philosopha for not acting like a bitch even though he sees that dreamer got him...that takes a lot since most cats around her would take a damn fit and start acting dumb as shit...
With that said...
dreamer definitely got him with the punches and almost every other aspect...
I didnt think the opener was too special, but...
"i read ya lines they played and boring like the cubic square
sixteen year old kid already hanging on nuts like pubic hair"
Good punch...
"this dude cant defend himself, hes young his quarrels weak
so he decides to put nuts in his mouth like a squarrels cheek"
Decent closer...enough to get you the battle
Philosopha, just gotta elevate...keep spittin
Vote...dreamer
Ps...return the favor...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...25#post1488225
P- took it in the vocab catagory... mettas too, but u had like 2 punches (not good)
dreamer- much harder punches.... stayed on the topic thru the whole batte, n thas y u won...plain n simple
Vote- Dreamer
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good battle
decent from both sides, i like both of yalls structure, and i like the way both of yall did yalls flow, your personals, and punches were all about the same in my eyes, this was pretty evenly matched all over, but i will have to give my vote to phil just cause i went better with his rhythem
V/Phil
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Phil-your stuff was pretty bad, punches were stupid. Even though you tried makin em sound smart. They were horrible, i don't care how original they were, they were just plain sucky. Your structure was weak, and it totally killed the flow. I felt that you could have done better than this but damn, this was bad. Your vocab was definetely better than dreamer's but it didn't matter much since you just came so weak with everything else. overall, you had weak everything except for vocab, overall 3/10.
Dreamer-had better structure. Your bars were even all the way and I felt that you've had more experience with structue since you kept it good. Vocabulary was weak, but not horrible. Props for doing good on this piece. Your punches were better than his far beyond comparison. I was surprised to read this from a newbie to this site, but you did pretty good. Flow was decent, sometimes it was off but it was definetely better than phil's. Good job, everything was good overall. 6/10
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