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    Love - Hate Relationship {Formula & Lyric collab}

    1st = Lyric 2nd = Formula

    I Love You. . .
    Been together for a few years, Passion is still there within
    Made it past the ups and downs, through the thick and thin
    Bubbling emotion boils within, you make me feel new sensations
    Jus looking into your eyes, gives my soul a deep gratification
    Summary of my love you see, so deeply imbedded in me
    Emotions are hard to suppress, when you feel them so naturally
    We’ve had so many good times, dancing the night away forever
    Romantically attached, could never sever bonds on this endeavor
    Linguistics don’t hold the words, for my feelings they can’t describe
    Have to bribe my feelings to hide, or I’d be constantly ecstatic inside
    Stay up late lay in bed just to talk, and reminisce on times of laughter
    How We first met in high school, and you were the only girl I was after
    We define the very meaning of the Phrase, "Love at first sight"
    Seeing you makes life alright, with you I soar to new heights
    Evening walks through the park, watch the sun wink across the horizon
    Unseen problems never crossed my mind, brain should have wizened

    I Hate You. . .
    'Cause see now i'm livened, and all this shit is going to escape
    Every drip from my wrist mirrors every mistake I thought was great
    You fucked around, after our walks, you'd say you'd be back
    Now look at me bitch, my heart is shattered with no pieces intact
    No strings attached, I shouldn't have let you roam freely
    Should've recognized the lie when you was always late to see me
    I thought you loved me ? Now you can't face me or speak truth
    I'm begging you, for one fucking instant let some wisdom leak through
    You erased all the good times in one night when I caught you on top
    Of my best fucking friend, my heart stopped, my jaw dropped
    But I've never been an individual to raise my hand to a female
    And push shit to critical, I'ma admit too, Ya grill shoulda been detailed
    It wasn't Love At First Sight, it was use him for what he's worth
    I guess it's my fucking fault, been vunerable to women since birth
    Fuck the laughter, the cards, the candy, the long fucking talks
    Tonight, you're on the street bitch, take that long fucking walk
    You always wanted to take, under the stars, just face it bitch
    You had love, but feel my hate stemming from a tainted relationship

    Summarized Relationship. . .

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    Dope........Nice description and emotion both of you.......

    Your imagery was well described....dope job......In this piece i could easily relate to both sides of this piece....both came nicely....i think its simplicity made this piece as good as it was.....cause it wasnt all bugged out with vocabulary....know what i mean? i just think in a topic like this....it should be approached this way....

    We’ve had so many good times, dancing the night away forever
    Romantically attached, could never sever bonds on this endeavor
    ^^^Line i can really relate to...^^^

    Fuck the laughter, the cards, the candy, the long fucking talks
    Tonight, you're on the street bitch, take that long fucking walk
    ^^^same here^^^

    Good job you guys....nice emotional, deep piece.....enjoyed the read....

    Oh an Lyric hit up Formula and my Cypher we busted last night....thanks peace!
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119241
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    dis piece was quite nice....i liked teh way u both took different perspectives on love and hate....
    vocab was decent throughout wasnt too complex and wasnt too basic jus perfect....flow and structure was flawless...
    i give dis a 8/10....woulda beena 9 but not too crazy bout topic....
    keep dropping good shit

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    Ok..nice attempt here..
    Found good emotion...
    Ok internals..such & such..
    The basics downpat..
    What you need are multis..
    Incorporate more multis..
    It's what defines a dope writer..
    You have potential..
    Just need to know how to use it..
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    I liked this piece it reminds me of this little problem me and dis gurl I was likin a few months ago lol I felt like bitch slappin her but I can never ever hit a woman NE-wayz
    yea I liked this
    nice flow and vocab
    it was real deep and emotional
    I like dis piece
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    wow nice piece1

    lyric = ya came well, flow was spot on and imaginary was excelent. maybe could of used a bit better vocab but thats the only thing bad. Ya used the topic well and i thought you had the harder job out of the both pieces. 8/10

    formula mc = wow this was dope, your vocab to start with was amazing, also flow was really good also imaginary was excelent also.......damm i could go on forever. good job. 9/10

    ok very good piece both of you, keep this shit up!! 17/20
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    Uppin this.. cause it deserves it.. why aren't people giving feedback on great pieces like this? damn...

    real nice piece here guys..
    It was set up and layed out real nice.. both flows right on.. every line connected great with the next (the thing I liked best), the vocab was good.. really nothing bad to say I enjoyed this.. and yea, I can relate here too

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