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    Shadows Of The Apocalypse

    .. Chapter one, verse eight, in the book of Revelations ..
    Depicting mother earth being shook to its foundation
    As God looks on his creation .. as a failure before his eyes
    Dissapointed and appauled, the thoughts .. soar in his mind
    .. Of whether to end humanity .. To disgard his craft ..
    .. To erase all life on the planet and start from scratch ..
    .. Such a heartless act .. but take into consideration ..
    Everything that he's gave us .. And how we've repayed him.
    We've lied, cheated an stole .. are adulterous & dishonest
    .. Do you REALLY think that's ANYWHERE near what he'd of wanted? ..
    He promised long ago that .. in this event ..
    Four angels of the Apocalypse would begin their descent ..
    .. Down to earth .. turning our world into a battlefield ..
    .. Humanity's final hour .. as we cling tight to a shattered shield ..
    .. Until that cast is broken, with no signs of vast emotion ..
    .. It was predicted long ago, now that time is fast approaching ..
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    .. The Four Horsemen Are Among Us ..
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    War
    .
    .. Horseman War began his course from the floors of heaven ..
    His cancerous form, taking storm of the war on terrorism
    Releasing its agressive rhythm, as war-scarred Baghdad fell
    .. Burnt flesh .. heavily decorated by shards of shrapnel ..
    The wounded left to die, as bystanders stood the sidelines
    .. Wide Eyed .. Watching the blood pour, & tryna fight cryin ..
    .. cold tears for the fallen, as the Horseman played Umpire ..
    .. to Bloodied Bullet-ridden Bodies; laid to rest from the gun fire ..
    Bare flesh .. torn from bone .. As the innocent fall
    .. The horseman's stake was claimed. Their victim's of War ..
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    Famine
    .
    "Help your fellow man"
    .. It's often neglected by parliment ..
    So the third world felt the wrath; as Famine struck at the heart of it
    .. Food sources were scarce, and the villagers starving ..
    As fierce floods destroyed the wheat they'd pillaged for harvest
    Hunger consumed the pupulace, beneath their hand-me-downs
    .. Hungry for answers as to why this .. had to happen now ..
    The Famine was God sent; a horseman of ruthless choice
    .. That let thousands starve to death for him to prove his point ..
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    Pestilence / Plague
    .
    .. Among this apocaliptic apex .. Plague played his part ..
    Leaving the world astounded with an outbreak of SARS
    .. No one was safe from harm; the disease increased its cause ..
    .. through the un-knowingly infected, eager to leave the shores ..
    And escape the sudden outbreak; consuming their city
    As an increasing death-toll has them doomed in self-pity
    The news reached a global audience; announced on TV
    .. Brought to the world's attention ..
    .. Plague had done what it set out to achieve ..
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    Death
    .
    Think back to nine eleven .. To the building the planes were flown
    To the second you watched the towers become a heap of paint & stone
    .. To when the first plane collided against the Tower's face & ..
    .. How the world watched; as it collapsed to its foundations ..
    Leaving nothing in its wake, but a bitter tasting surplus
    .. Among those that lived to see it ..
    .. Death has served his purpose ..
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    .. Im a religious man, so it's important i stress this ..
    .. I strongly believe God's using these events as a message ..
    .. A predule of sorts .. Insight into our looming fate ..
    .. Of how the Apocalyptic Horsemen WILL consume our race ..
    .. If we dont start making a change; or an attempt at stopping this ..
    .. We'll all be men in black ..
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    Shadows Of The Apocalypse

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    yo shit!.... that wus ILL
    I mena seriously Baron...
    I know your at the top of the
    topical ranking list but even
    comming form someone like
    you this wus just dope...
    Imagery wus so good
    it was like you ere there as it went down...
    vocab completely in tact...flowed perfectly,
    rhyme scheme wus nice... good internals
    keep this up man...! dope piece...

    by the way could u hit up my 2 part open mic...
    ....Tragic..Death....
    and
    ....Tragic..Death(II)....
    links are in my sig i need some feedback...
    again..., completly dope! this kid really is blazin'...
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    Hahaha ..
    .. i take it you've read nothing from me before, eh ?!

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    Wack fuckery..but you knew that already you wack fuck

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    no baron I read second chance by you...
    that wus also dope and the concept wus good
    I used to be BugZ-bunNy
    u mus tnot of known that...
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    damn......interestin shit ...................I liked the imaginary....of this piece i have to say this is the 1st piece i have read from you impressive.....amazed...

    show some love on mine

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...75#post1198675

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    Flow was good - I didn't really see any multis - let me know if I just missed them. Vocab level was good as well - no complaints. Liked the way you went about your topic - considering each aspect then summarizing - nice and logical. Saw a couple of lines that I didn't see the rhymes in, like:
    "Bare flesh .. torn from bone .. As the innocent fall
    .. The horseman's stake was claimed. Their victim's of War .."
    Liked this piece overall, we share some similar thoughts. Hit something in my sig, preferably "Broken Metamorphosis" if you haven't yet.

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    I didn't really see any multis - let me know if I just missed them.

    Yeah, i must of forgot to bold and italicise them for you:


    .. Chapter one, verse eight, in the book of Revelations ..
    Depicting mother earth being shook to its foundation
    As God looks on his creation .. as a failure before his eyes
    Dissapointed and appauled, the thoughts .. soar in his mind
    .. Of whether to end humanity .. To disgard his craft ..
    .. To erase all life on the planet and start from scratch ..

    and so on, and so on throughout the whole fucking thing whicjh you obviously didnt read.

    Thanks for the reply Demik, i'll have to read one of yours sometime.

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    "Yeah, i must of forgot to bold and italicise them for you:"
    Shit - I don't know how I missed them. Much apologies.
    "and so on, and so on throughout the whole fucking thing whicjh you obviously didnt read."
    I assure you I did read it.

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    ok well ill giev you what i think . IF there was any flows in this my level of skill cant't recognise them this was almost perfection for me. I love this piece becaouse its a topic i can connect to , and the way you narated it sort of gave me a Lord of the Ring image of our world ( lame ah?) . I read it 3 or 4 times and WOW. Amazing stuff man. I have to say this is propably the best piece iv read on here and thats no joke.

    Fuck man all the props to you .,.... and if you could take a look at my work it would be great if i could get some pointers of you... anyways

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115041

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    Baron I aint read any of your shit before man but I can see why your'e top of the topical ranking man this was illness personified well done man

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    Haha ..
    .. ive plenty of stuff here, used to be 'Camarac' .. check RB Legends Open Mic section, some of mine's in there.

    Thanks for the peepage though, i'll reply to all yours when i get time.

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    HoLLa . .

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    yo this was extremly dope,

    props baron you have gotten alot better from when you where my cheerleader

    lol

    i loved this piece, utter sickness

    props

    please peep this bro
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115031

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