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    Alone in a Room

    At the start of each day it is just me...
    Alone in a room.
    I have no eagle feathers, no honor song has been
    sung for me and
    There is no recognition for my caring for the homeless
    and hungry maybe
    I am only good at the little things well
    My life is nothing pretty that is why
    I hope I can sleep peacefully tonight the bottom line is
    At the end of the day it is just me...
    Alone in a room.
    we are what we are, what we never think we are.

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    hmm...short yes...but theres somethin to it...

    I am only good at the little things

    that line seems more then appropriate in this...small yess but it still works to portray the meaning...liked the repitition of the alone in the room...draws the piece to a close...

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