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    Existence

    I’m try’na make the best of the rest of my existence
    Without contradictions by myself or from those in the distance
    The less resistance the better, a smooth ride all the way
    I mean I play, for the day, to elaborate, for the now
    The present date, so I concentrate on recreation… 90%
    The rest is spent or meant for recuperation, a healing event
    To free the mind from torment it gained during the hours
    Of power surges from powders and pints, and soon the toll towers
    Like a shower damping ya mood, it intrudes the lavish living
    Ya can’t refuse or sleep deprivation will end up killing
    So my decision is to do no more or less than the minimum
    4 at best, my continuum, leaves 20 play’n, my equilibrium
    I love living em, every minute from then til when I finish
    Til my functions diminish I’ll bow only to health during illness
    What is this? To exist isn’t enough, plenty time to curl up
    I say fuck the safe road, take the highway, or you’ll get overtook
    So I conduct my practices in top gear, leave the losers my dust
    Dazed and concussed, cos when they die there thinking…
    where’d I get stuck? Should’a listened to Dev… what he told us!
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    upp.....
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    This was a pretty good drop here man....you had some good structure in this i thought.....You had some good flow in this i thought, it stayed on pretty much through out the whole piece, never really got off....You had some nice vocab in this like all your pieces lol....overall a nice drop man...keep at it.

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    reppin UK well wit this piece n I enjoyed ya whole steez...wordplay was good and flow n structure was immaculate...liked the concept to..

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    lol, this was a dope piece about how you want to play, live life to the fullest .. lol
    i thought it was pretty dope .. multie's were cool
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    ..as ways..Dope...what else...

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    thnx man.... any more?
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    c'mon peeps....
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    tight skeem with the vocab dog. you hit it right on point.

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    thnx man,,,, i put sum thought into this......
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    This was an ok drop. The flow was a little choppy at some times. You had some pretty good vocab, it was used the right way. Some of the worldplay was really nice. Your structure was lined up with each other well. Like sand said, the multies were nice. Over all it was a good drop, It wasnt anything spectacular or anything. But nice work, and keep it up hommie...

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