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@Fresh @Kuhn
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u live an awful life. your to do list just keeps getting deeper, sadly
so hows ur plate always full but u dont have the means to feed ya family
I've gone easy for 2 weeks but you aint challengin shit
A little heat will ruin fresh you lil talentless bitch
Vote - Fresh
Kuhn's concept isn5 bad, but the execution is too stripped down & simple. Fell flat as a result. Fresh had a light jab, but I'm digging the layered wording.
Kuhns bar has potential but wording issues
V- fresh
Fresh - cool turn of phrase, not the hardest hitting punch but the wording was clean and executed nicely
Kuhn - I feel like the wording in the punchline was a little lazy compared to the set up and after the set up I was expecting something that hit hard but it just didn’t come. Concept was there though
V/ fresh
ugh yeah I gotta give this to Fresh lmao.. Kuhn's felt like it wasn't complex ENOUGH
heat ruining something fresh has potential but coulda cut deeper with some polish
vote Fresh
I didn’t like freshs setup but the finish was a pretty good flip and creative. Kuhns was direct but felt it had no sting.
V/ fresh
Fresh wins