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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules
10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)
No Bullshit Allowed
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VERSES DUE SUNDAY 11:59 PST
24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent
BATTLES CLOSE W.E
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Let’s get it
This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid
@plethora due tonight
this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
give u that L,ED.. gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach
Good stuff. That LED line made me laugh. Strong ending.
Let’s get some votes here!
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Originally Posted by Encrypted Data
Mvgt PlethoraQuote:
Originally Posted by plethora
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Originally Posted by Encrypted Data
Got pleth. Other guys new i imagine. Cool read brosQuote:
Originally Posted by plethora
Pleth
This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
First line is a stretch. Second line has creativity but the wording is meh.
Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
Another stretch. Simply changing out 'you dont get it' with 'but' improves the line. I see what you were going for with your arrest/no authority concept but ehhh
Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
I'm a fan of revisiting a concept as long as both punches are good enough to stand alone. But the underlined is lazy as fuck. This was kinda funny and, if you reworded some shit, would've hit
This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
Wtf
Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid
These 2 bars flow so much better than the rest that I'd think someone else wrote it. The punch in the first bar is more like a set up.
Aside from the last two bars, the wording is way too stretched. While you had some ok concepts, even great concepts cannot overcome poor wording. The fake Prince line was the best out of the bunch if I had to pick. You stuck with him being gay for a while there AND as your closer. Gotta be more creative. Also, the people voting on these battles should be able to pick up on wordplay without the need for you to explain shit in parentheses. This aint the FL
4/10
VS
this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
avg filler
milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
bad filler
that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
give u that L,ED.. gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
decent wordplay, coulda rhymed better but ok bar overall
run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
I was rockin wit it till the second line. Didn't hit
bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
Aight
talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
Ehhh
get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach
Ok closer.
I got it about half and half between decent and subpar lines. More than enough to take this one.
6.5/10
Vote: Plethora
Encrypted ur shit was better this week then the week before.. Wordplay was a bit outdated tho..and u need to work on setting up your bars..use less words.. Your bar are a little to stretched.. U def had better attempt than last week. U def got outshied in this battle tho..pleth was alot stronger and had better setups... Wasnt to good of a verse but def enough for the win.. Encry keep reading/voting on battles and see what the people want..how the bars are set up n delivered..keep at it tho..ull be get down.. Ur last bars were how they should all be worded..just get more creative
VOTE PLETH
This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
ok so first off this is long winded as fuck. second, if the bar is written properly you shouldn't have to explain the wordplay (actually here you would have been fine without explaining because i got it without the expo). not a fan of this bar as is, though it did have potential
Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
too simple. not a fan
Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
didn't like this
I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
hmm ok ill give a jab for this
This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
not a fan
Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
your shortening them up now but its not hittnig for me
Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid
not a fan
vs
this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
this is absolute trash lmfaooo. played concept though ive seen these type of fresh bars used a few times.
milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
if data had this bar i woulda said its good but coming from you i will say its light
that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
give u that L,ED.. gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
cool
run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
diggin it
bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
lmao dope
talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
nah
get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach
ok
this was pretty one sided. plethora a bitch for trash talking me but he gets the win here
v/ pleth
milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
if data had this bar i woulda said its good but coming from you i will say its light
Don’t curve the grades for me. If anything judge me more harshly. I won’t improve that way.
Good win Pleth.
5-0 pleth wins