Cry Me a River v2

Cry me a river

I remember when you showed me
You used to kiss and hold me
Taught me a dance my tongue still spells to this day
We used to trip and laugh just like you were my homie
Now you act like you don’t know me
But who ever knew you’d go all in and play
I do this here just based upon a theory
I wonder if you still hear me 🤔
It doesn’t mean that you should fear me
Cause them eyes still speak, them lies stay weak
But I still can’t streak one bad word to say...
code of a symbol similar to D’usse

Just lost... lost... cause you were my every day!

Heartfelt stuff. Damn, who broke your heart? The 'tongue dance' line was a definite stand out; great wordplay. Would've liked to have seen more but you got the message across. Some compound rhymes and stronger vocab would reinforce your style but I like that you march to the beat of own drum. Originality is gold.

Keep posting. please rtf.

-6

Thanks... but original... no - just warm ups and therapy

6 years is from 6th grade to 12th - I need help getting them bitches off me. I tied everything! (Random outburst but seriously... it’s serious)