10 Lines
Due In An An Hour
House Rules
Bar by Bar Breakdowns..
Printable View
10 Lines
Due In An An Hour
House Rules
Bar by Bar Breakdowns..
..tsk, tsk
:coolio:
.
..
...
..
.
Rich schemes but ya lacking the wealth.. nobody see ya skill i guess you trapped in the stealthQuote:
Originally Posted by casanova
you didn't have to reply to the callout..
If you wanna see a bitch slapped - just try smacking yaself!!
Poor shit the value smells.. Upgrade to standing scales and comebacks landings failed..
But hell, ya skill report explains it all
Each concept cast a D - like the Philly rapper album sails!!
With ya sly gay approach.. couldn't murder with a killing spit if i raped and split ya throat..
so i'll take ya mic and shove it
down NoVA Tube - as if they canceled TV from the Tri State votes!!
Noble to prones.. ya royal dreams slips the image, bitch, can't hold on to thrones..
Those verses? Dude leave em alone..
I serve a punch close to halitosis..
That's quick to knockout Casa - til ya buried where the Odele [Odor Lay] Homes!!
- p u r e
LMFAO. why do i battle here...?
.
.
they got me killin' a chick. u ain't winnin me.. step.
usernames Pure. why didn't u just call urself 'IHAVEN'TLOSTMYVIRGINITYYET'
i LOVE fat women, u'd make me kick the habit of bad sin.
u'd keep me clean .. cuz ya got a bellybutton i could take a bath in.
i thought u were a dude. actin' like a wild cat.
said i'd eat this pussy.. then i seen ya. ..& i'd let ya win just to avoid that.
i'll merk ya, bitch. u won't be caught breathing.
with one hit you'll see Pure blood all over the room like a voldemort meeting.
i said u'd nvr be anything. so u decided to deaden the speakers..
then wrote ya ass off.. oh no wait, that was me, ur friends, parents, and teachers.
unlucky.
vote casa
pure had a few decent concepts like the nameplay and hitting urself
but they werent worded well enough to hit hard enough...
cas had a consistant verse with a few mehish bars but def enough
to take this..the bathtub ish was hilarious btw
intro was solid...few other decent lines as well...
good battle u two...stay up^
lil this was one-sided. cas- that belly buttom line was ill, a couple other nice hits too. pure- you ruined your whole verse with your horrible structure && super stretched bars
they got me killin' a chick. u ain't winnin me.. step.
usernames Pure. why didn't u just call urself 'IHAVEN'TLOSTMYVIRGINITYYET'
i LOVE fat women, u'd make me kick the habit of bad sin.
u'd keep me clean .. cuz ya got a bellybutton i could take a bath in.
vs
n/a
v/ cas, hit me vs chuck up honestly. and pure if you want some pointers PM me
^ agree, first punch really just annihilated everything :O
V/Cas
u gotta expand on ur vote smir.
they got me killin' a chick. u ain't winnin me.. step.
usernames Pure. why didn't u just call urself 'IHAVEN'TLOSTMYVIRGINITYYET'
predictable
i LOVE fat women, u'd make me kick the habit of bad sin.
u'd keep me clean .. cuz ya got a bellybutton i could take a bath in.
lol meh
i thought u were a dude. actin' like a wild cat.
said i'd eat this pussy.. then i seen ya. ..& i'd let ya win just to avoid that.
rofl!!!
i'll merk ya, bitch. u won't be caught breathing.
with one hit you'll see Pure blood all over the room like a voldemort meeting.
...
i said u'd nvr be anything. so u decided to deaden the speakers..
then wrote ya ass off.. oh no wait, that was me, ur friends, parents, and teachers.
meh
vs
Rich schemes but ya lacking the wealth.. nobody see ya skill i guess you trapped in the stealth
you didn't have to reply to the callout..
If you wanna see a bitch slapped - just try smacking yaself!!
woah that was dope!!! no dammit that was simple
Poor shit the value smells.. Upgrade to standing scales and comebacks landings failed..
But hell, ya skill report explains it all
Each concept cast a D - like the Philly rapper album sails!!
good concept but worded poorly, cred on the multies though
With ya sly gay approach.. couldn't murder with a killing spit if i raped and split ya throat..
so i'll take ya mic and shove it
down NoVA Tube - as if they canceled TV from the Tri State votes!!
no
Noble to prones.. ya royal dreams slips the image, bitch, can't hold on to thrones..
Those verses? Dude leave em alone..
I serve a punch close to halitosis..
That's quick to knockout Casa - til ya buried where the Odele [Odor Lay] Homes!!
wow stinky graveyards. i've seen everything
v/Cas he only needed one solid line to win.
Sorry -- okay.
Your flow was awkward (at best) because of the way you typed everything out. I found myself rereading parts to find where the rhyme was. Your punches were simply weaker than Casa's, although I enjoyed "Upgrade to standing scales and comebacks landings failed..". It was more miss than hit on an overall level, and kinda fluctuated instead of focusing on point like Casa.
Want more? Was in a rush before hence I didn't do an elaborate explanation like the above poster lol.
Quote:
Originally Posted by PureMuseq
1. I've never seen it before but I got a funny feeling it's a dead concept.. aside from that I thought it was aight.
2. Flow was choppy.. I seen this concept here in FL like two days ago and it was flipped better... bad wording here, weak bar overall.
3. Nah, weak... Nameplay is a stretch, nah, I wouldn't even call that a nameplay.
4. Flow was choppy again, your bars are too stretched... need multies if you want to pull of the long bars IMO. Punch was pretty weak.
5. .....?
1. Could have setup this one up waayy better but the punch was pretty cool, I lol'd..Quote:
Originally Posted by casanova.
2. Lol... Not that great, kind of corny.
3. Nah, not feeling this one. I seen the direction you were trying to go but meh.
4. I thought it could have been worded better but it was decent'ish.
5. Mehh closer.
V/ Cas had a couple decent bars, his verse was more humorous.. He got my vote for coming with the better drop. Pure only had one decent bar... Cut your lines down!