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hey guys this is a song i wrote after my fiance quit her job, she had an asshole boss who gave her an ultimatum from her job and me, im proud as shit of me, please tell me what u think
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6fbVcdpJGLw
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...n-the-Sunshine
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...d-be-Remdolla)
The instrumental is really different. Was a lot more on the rock tip, without a doubt.
I can see what you are going for - unforntately, the pieces do not come altogether the way they need to. The vocal quality is decent, and the mix is actually pretty good - the flow is definitely rushed in numerous places, including the hook. Are you a former rocker going rap?
You're obviously comfortable on a mic, yet not with the flow scheme yet.
It was still a good listen. Had me chuckling quite a bit - just wish it was a bit snappier on the ears.
Keep dropping.
thank u, actually i been going back and forth genres, startin as rap, i apprecuate the feed bro, i need to write shit fon cuz ur right it semms rushed