10 lines
due in wednesday
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10 lines
due in wednesday
“Thank you for being a friend…
Travel round the world & back again!!!”
“Everywhere you look, everywhere you go
There's a heart (there's a heart), a hand to hold onto
Everywhere you look, everywhere you go
There's a face of somebody who needs you”
See this section been in idle, now he prays for a revival
Ironic ur trying to bring life n lines back, cuz the docs’ll have to do the same to ur vitals
FL champ? He can’t swim w/ the sharks, bars got us frownin, he lookin bogus
Only title wave we’re interested in seeing w/ u, involves one drowning u in the ocean
Blow em out cuz it’s nothing major, see this joke is the biggest hater
I’ve got a vape addiction, so this match ur getting smoked w/ a little flavor
Wanna get ur momentum back on the text scene? See it’s broken u bitch
Last time he got his groove back, it was w/ a razor trying to reopen his wrist
Chop em up clean, this merkin gonna last w/ some flair
If I fumble the bag this battle, it’s cuz ur fat ass was tough af to drag up the stairs
You’re bitch is old as fuck and your obsessed with them heavy dikes faggit.
I bet there’s more cob webs in them pussy walls than Betty whites attic.
You’re known as mediocre don’t try to step beyond that you can keep your role.
No one wants to see rhyno on top we’re trying to revive the site not dig a deeper hole,
You don’t even thrive on other sites and on rb you def ain’t receiving glory.
You and ronin like to dickride each other so when you tell that tale it’s not a deceiving story
FL and LLL when I bring those staples back brace your self cuz you’re all fucked
Only staples you bring back are after we fight the ones that’ll wire your jaw shut
Already killed you once Paul bearers ain’t suppose to bury twice dude
In the era of come backs where stuck with dagels and fairy’s like you
Lol man the wording on Diasick's punches killed a few of them for me. like the closer, and the deeper hole line both fell flat to me. The betty white's attic thing was cool, tell the tale line was cool, the staples line was straight but wiring jaws shut feels like something I read before I dunno. I felt like Ryno on the other hand was just swingin' punch after punch and the wording was super crisp. That vape line was HEAVY - the title wave line and the vitals line both feel a bit played out but the wording made them both zingers lol. Fumble the bag was tight. The razor/wrist line felt old too kind of but wording was spot on. Like... the most original/dopest line of the battle to me was the vape line. Diasick went for some more original concepts but like I said, the wording just felt off on a few. Really I'm nitpicking the whole battle because it's a close one...I could see people voting either way but I was more impressed by the bars and concepts Ryno threw out there overall. This was a cool match though! Props. I got next!!! :laugh:
Vote Ryno
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Originally Posted by Ryno
Decent battle. Not the best Ive seen from either of you. But I definitely feel like Ryno edged this based on consistency. Dia had my favorite bar, but also had some lines fall flat.Quote:
Originally Posted by Stranger
Vote Ryno
Rhyno Wins Via KO