(2-0)Pavonia vs (2-0)Coup[Coup Wins]

Coup was worded well. Came off nice, me personally I don't know of any 14th century shield called Pavis, so if I had to look it up I don't like it. How dare you try and make me google something. Not a bad punch tho.

Pav - no parentheses please, I think the dash and itallics were enough.... Could've prolly worded it better, cool idea tho no doubt, concept was put together well.. Punch didn't hit as hard cuz of wording..

Tough call here IMO, don't think pav neededbto explain and coup went with shit that not everyone may know about. Could be a damn toss up but I'd hate to vote a tie, vote coup better overall punch technically speaking.

v-coup,

less forced hit harder.. both were good but the reap lies was a little basic

Pavis line was pretty good, kinda wordy but still. But Pav, Reap Lies? This is a horrible Grim reaper flip. I got Coup taking this easy

v/Coup

Decent battle here. Coup nameplay was nice imo, pavs bar was smooth but simple. Set up was nice but the play wasn't really a direct hit. So I got coup taking this for being more direct and clever

V/coup

Coup: good shit bro.. Wording was nice... Concept was Eh.. Punch could of been better but I really enjoyed the flow so it really helped both other categories (punch, concept).

Vs

Pavonia: wack tbh.. Eh Idek why your explaining your wordplay at the end.. Concept was bland didn't even get it I'm pretty sure.. The punch could of been decent but fell flat due to you explaining your fucking wordplay.. Tbh that ruins everything for the reader it does for me at least.

Vote: Coup for a better everything


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reap lies was whack

I mean the wordplay itself wasn't terrible, but some wordplays should remain unused, due to how whack the concept as a whole would have to be to use it

pavis was an ok nameplay, wording was good, enough to take this

ironically tho pavis was nowhere near as creative & complex as the one I had for pav last week, yet pav's punch was just as bad as last week n coup will win this.. by a lot

just proves how much ppl WANT to see me lose lol hater faggots

v/coup

V.Coup/pav had the better concept but it was poorly executed,

Vote coup.
Coup went the nameplay/wordplay route. It was setup well. But a lil wordy on the punch
pave, I didn't like all u r biblical references. I understand that they tie in to the replies w/p but u over did it

eh... neither punch was that good tbh... both were simple but Coup's made way more sense in the direct rout... I never like Expo's and all that decoration... if you have to explain the wp, it's not good...

vote Coup

Thought coup got this pretty easy that Pav is wordplay was pretty basic but it was executed dope.. Wasn't feeling the reap lies replies wp thought it was also basic/played but with bad execution. MVGT coup

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