10 lines of horrorcore
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10 lines of horrorcore
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Due Friday the 9th.
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is my check
Ya man
I got my 10 ready to go @mv
@MV
I’ll cut you into pieces.. rip ya dick off n feed it to my cat
Leaving nothing but a pair of gruesome balls, n we know you’ll never do that
Start w/ ya neck then to your lower limbs. bite down n hold steady
Ya legacy a knife so big it’ll look like your family invented the machete
w/ a razor I’ll carve off your skin, slice u open wit a sickening grin
Blades will enter embody until he can feel it in his bones there going in
I’m the type of rapist to tape this.. then frame you for the slaughter
If the police wind up fingering u it’ll be a reenactment of what I did to ya wife/daughter
Take a chainsaw to this man’s skull. enjoy the show while I’m preforming
So much Gore in your face I’ll start harassing you about global warming
things dont appear as they seem, Cherakee's Dreams every time my pen is unshealthed
in horrorcore if i wendigo unnoticed cuz; losing, defeat is inevitable when the demon got wings
im here to tear ya flesh, the original G.O.A.T. to fear baphemet
slit your throat n take a bath n that, then plastic on ya baby face like a Cabbage Patch
im vicious as it fucking gets, gas the play room then ill blame on some SIDS
to beat me to the punch there is only one right angle then its straight down your wrist
this gift and curse beyond my decision, in la familia we go by tradition
questioning my technique will get you cut wit precision, its a weird transition from asking Y!!!??? to Y incisions
nihilism leads hedonism n this is lethal, restrain you for 1 week to over feed you
tie you-beat you, till the meat starts to seep through and this fat greasy rapper opens up like a dropped Gordito
YEAHHHHHH
MIRACLE --
I’ll cut you into pieces.. rip ya dick off n feed it to my cat
Leaving nothing but a pair of gruesome balls, n we know you’ll never do that
DECENT BAR HERE..
Start w/ ya neck then to your lower limbs. bite down n hold steady
Ya legacy a knife so big it’ll look like your family invented the machete
w/ a razor I’ll carve off your skin, slice u open wit a sickening grin
Blades will enter embody until he can feel it in his bones there going in
I’m the type of rapist to tape this.. then frame you for the slaughter
If the police wind up fingering u it’ll be a reenactment of what I did to ya wife/daughter
Take a chainsaw to this man’s skull. enjoy the show while I’m preforming
So much Gore in your face I’ll start harassing you about global warming
I thought the best one was the MACHETE LINE..good bat there..
overall --
7.5/10
vs.
things dont appear as they seem, Cherakee's Dreams every time my pen is unshealthed
in horrorcore if i wendigo unnoticed cuz; losing, defeat is inevitable when the demon got wings
im here to tear ya flesh, the original G.O.A.T. to fear baphemet
slit your throat n take a bath n that, then plastic on ya baby face like a Cabbage Patch
im vicious as it fucking gets, gas the play room then ill blame on some SIDS
to beat me to the punch there is only one right angle then its straight down your wrist
this gift and curse beyond my decision, in la familia we go by tradition
questioning my technique will get you cut wit precision, its a weird transition from asking Y!!!??? to Y incisions
nihilism leads hedonism n this is lethal, restrain you for 1 week to over feed you
tie you-beat you, till the meat starts to seep through and this fat greasy rapper opens up like a dropped Gordito
VERY GOOD VERSE MC.. i thought u did decent like 'MIRACLE..
BEST BAR -_ WENDIGO..
8/10
VOTE -- MV ..
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Re: HORRORCORE: MV vs Miracle (OPEN FOR VOTES)
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The best line from Miracle was...
I’m the type of rapist to tape this.. then frame you for the slaughter
If the police wind up fingering u it’ll be a reenactment of what I did to ya wife/daughter
because it flowed smooth and the style in these lines as well.
I think if Miracle had more wordplay in his punches then it would be better.
The best line from MV was...
nihilism leads hedonism n this is lethal, restrain you for 1 week to over feed you
tie you-beat you, till the meat starts to seep through and this fat greasy rapper opens up like a dropped Gordito
because it was a good closer giving a laugh and it flowed well with the multis consistently hitting.
I felt the vocab used from MV really brought together the wordplay and caused the punches to hit.
My vote goes to MV.
Mvgt - Miracle.
Yes I know the focus is gory Imagery. I think his punch-driven approach conveyed more impactful imagery then MVs verse. I thought MV only edged the flow cat. Gruesome balls was fire.
I’ll cut you into pieces.. rip ya dick off n feed it to my cat
Leaving nothing but a pair of gruesome balls, n we know you’ll never do that
formate is a little played
Start w/ ya neck then to your lower limbs. bite down n hold steady
Ya legacy a knife so big it’ll look like your family invented the machete
i dont get this.. maybe over my head
w/ a razor I’ll carve off your skin, slice u open wit a sickening grin
Blades will enter embody until he can feel it in his bones there going in
could be better
I’m the type of rapist to tape this.. then frame you for the slaughter
If the police wind up fingering u it’ll be a reenactment of what I did to ya wife/daughter
doest make sense.. do you mean finger as in fingerprints or sexually?
Take a chainsaw to this man’s skull. enjoy the show while I’m preforming
So much Gore in your face I’ll start harassing you about global warming
not good... might as well had said "he'd start harassing you about global warming"
vs
things dont appear as they seem, Cherakee's Dreams every time my pen is unshealthed
in horrorcore if i wendigo unnoticed cuz; losing, defeat is inevitable when the demon got wings
wendigo is forced and sheathed and wings dont rhyme
im here to tear ya flesh, the original G.O.A.T. to fear baphemet
slit your throat n take a bath n that, then plastic on ya baby face like a Cabbage Patch
needs work... and again doesnt rhyme
im vicious as it fucking gets, gas the play room then ill blame on some SIDS
to beat me to the punch there is only one right angle then its straight down your wrist
better..still a little wordy though
this gift and curse beyond my decision, in la familia we go by tradition
questioning my technique will get you cut wit precision, its a weird transition from asking Y!!!??? to Y incisions
worrdy but effective... thats really three lines
nihilism leads hedonism n this is lethal, restrain you for 1 week to over feed you
tie you-beat you, till the meat starts to seep through and this fat greasy rapper opens up like a dropped Gorito
dope but again.. wordy
vote-MV... i honestly thought Miracle would win this...ol' MV proved me wrong
Quote:
Originally Posted by miracle
Quote:
Originally Posted by MV
Feel like Miracle came a lil more polished and direct
I dig MV style it’s just text battle wise, thought Mir had a more well rounded verse
MV Kinda lost me a bit with some of the wording but that’s just me
Dope battle fellaZ, hard to pick a winner just comes down to preference ig
I’ll cut you into pieces.. rip ya dick off n feed it to my cat
Leaving nothing but a pair of gruesome balls, n we know you’ll never do that
What?
Start w/ ya neck then to your lower limbs. bite down n hold steady
Ya legacy a knife so big it’ll look like your family invented the machete
ehh.. nice flow tho..
w/ a razor I’ll carve off your skin, slice u open wit a sickening grin
Blades will enter embody until he can feel it in his bones there going in
ehh..
I’m the type of rapist to tape this.. then frame you for the slaughter
If the police wind up fingering u it’ll be a reenactment of what I did to ya wife/daughter
Nice bar here..
Take a chainsaw to this man’s skull. enjoy the show while I’m preforming
So much Gore in your face I’ll start harassing you about global warming
ehh finisher
things dont appear as they seem, Cherakee's Dreams every time my pen is unshealthed
in horrorcore if i wendigo unnoticed cuz; losing, defeat is inevitable when the demon got wings
Ehh opener
im here to tear ya flesh, the original G.O.A.T. to fear baphemet
slit your throat n take a bath n that, then plastic on ya baby face like a Cabbage Patch
That was tight.. much better
im vicious as it fucking gets, gas the play room then ill blame on some SIDS
to beat me to the punch there is only one right angle then its straight down your wrist
ehh.. nice set up tho..
this gift and curse beyond my decision, in la familia we go by tradition
questioning my technique will get you cut wit precision, its a weird transition from asking Y!!!??? to Y incisions
a lil stretched but Nice
nihilism leads hedonism n this is lethal, restrain you for 1 week to over feed you
tie you-beat you, till the meat starts to seep through and this fat greasy rapper opens up like a dropped Gordito
Nice finisher
Good battle here.. Miracle had a better flow but MV pull this one out with better punchlines and concepts dispite the slightly sstretched lines. Vote= MV
I’ll cut you into pieces.. rip ya dick off n feed it to my cat
Leaving nothing but a pair of gruesome balls, n we know you’ll never do that
Aye not for nothing this was a hell of an open lol like the us open lol. Nice build and didn’t disappoint with the grew some balls line. 7.5/10
Start w/ ya neck then to your lower limbs. bite down n hold steady
Ya legacy a knife so big it’ll look like your family invented the machete
Creative I like it but I’m now so sure how I feel about machete maybe I’m missing something but over all leg-a-see legacy was a good fit 7.3/10
w/ a razor I’ll carve off your skin, slice u open wit a sickening grin
Blades will enter embody until he can feel it in his bones there going in
Subtle wordplay here- enter em Mbody mv’s body till he feel it in bone also to embody is like represent something or someone like a character. Many actors embody the character in a scene and it could be a play on mv since he has a demonic theme profile. Still very subtle so I’ll give this a solid 7/10
I’m the type of rapist to tape this.. then frame you for the slaughter
If the police wind up fingering u it’ll be a reenactment of what I did to ya wife/daughter
Ok this is really thought provoking and complex I apologize if I don’t get it or if I am off in my analysis- so first line I feel has two meanings.
tape this, frame you could be video tape and getting the body in from of the recording but also tape like to keep something shut and to put the body in a frame of a wall or coffin.. then the other line is dark but it’s cool the police find the body and finger id you which makes your family moan and cry but him sending a finger to ya family your family will cry and moan while the police are still trying to put there finger on the suspect or a point in the right direction.. and of course fingering his wife and daughter because they were there when he killed you. Eh a solid 8/10 for complexity although not really my thing lol was still really good set up if you ask me.
Take a chainsaw to this man’s skull. enjoy the show while I’m preforming
So much Gore in your face I’ll start harassing you about global warming
Decent finish Al gore global warming and gore like the genre that they are battling as well as a gruesome scene that many viewers would harass if was on normal tv or etc.. I rate it about a 6.6/10 but hey I try hard not to give any tens because I really want to make it extremely hard for that to ever happen but over all this verse was definitely way above just some average person getting into this art. A lot of “rhyme and reason” complexity, choice words rhyme scheme and cadence I can literally read this with no structure and hit the rhymes perfectly this was well put together. Had some decent punches and doubles so I’m going to actually give this an 8.8/10 overall.
Mv
things dont appear as they seem, Cherakee's Dreams every time my pen is unshealthed
in horrorcore if i wendigo unnoticed cuz; losing, defeat is inevitable when the demon got wings
Holy shit- ok so this is extremely complicated and complexed but I’ll give it my best. Starts off saying things are not what it seems and paints a peaceful picture of him getting ready to write. Also he references Cherokee dream catchers which are made to look like angels that protected them while they sleep and they have wings or many arms.—- then as he starts writing he shows it was a front and wasn’t what it seems, he turns to a demon windigo with wings. Also he is saying if he wins it goes unnoticed because people generally expect you to lose against him when he so sick and tormented on the pen game.
Nah I gotta up this one I give it a 8/10 this was actually dope.
im here to tear ya flesh, the original G.O.A.T. to fear baphemet
slit your throat n take a bath n that, then plastic on ya baby face like a Cabbage Patch
Original goat or the horned devil he does a sacrificial throat slit and bathe in blood. I’m conflicted with the last line, unsure if he saying plasma or blood will splash and stick on a baby face as he does you in. However the plastic doll face is banned cuz it was getting stuck to hair and kids faces.. I’ll give this a solid 7/10
im vicious as it fucking gets, gas the play room then ill blame on some SIDS
to beat me to the punch there is only one right angle then its straight down your wrist
Ok yeah he definitely talking about killing ya kid lol good wordplay and gore for the theme but eh I don’t feel like it hit hard in a battle but amazing composition 6.7/10
this gift and curse beyond my decision, in la familia we go by tradition
questioning my technique will get you cut wit precision, its a weird transition from asking Y!!!??? to Y incisions
lol so his family are some serial killers and he has been groomed to this.. or his skill is so deep that if you question his words he will spazz on you and smoke you.. I like this one ask y or y incisions maybe can complex it even more with I’n cis - I insist - incis-sion ohhhhhh nah that’s fire ima give this a cool 7.8/10 lowkey this was I’ll.
nihilism leads hedonism n this is lethal, restrain you for 1 week to over feed you
tie you-beat you, till the meat starts to seep through and this fat greasy rapper opens up like a dropped Gordito
Ok when it comes to horror you got it my boy lmao I’m never grading one of these again lol but fire. 7.1/10
All in all I will say you have a super high level skill and pack a lot in ngl but horror seems to be your strong suit rn however I’ll say it’s easy for a consumer to get lost in translation of these bars I leave feeling like hmm did I catch the punch line ? Was there a punch line? lol I mean it’s really complexed which is good however I think structure could be better. Me personally I need people to separate words or highlight them so I know what’s intended to be misspelled or homophoned etc I miss things sometimes so yeah all in all I say this a sold solid 8.9-1/2 in my book in terms of battling another artist however if this was an open mic id have said 9.. dope
Ok so you both brought something to the table! Was a really good battle and I’m glad that I have no alliance to either of you lol because it breaks my heart to have to choose. Both were outstanding verses.. miracles verse was very fluid and concise, you can tell where his punches were and what he wanted to say- he was in and out boom raw talent and I loved that.
Mv was extremely complexed very deep and immersed into the horror lol borderline great art and seek therapy lol but very rich with content and a very nice selection of words! However I gotta choose. So mv your structure to me is a little off and you may benefit from hinting or using brackets or quotations to like give us a clue but otherwise awesome and miracle you did good but I kinda feel like this isn’t your genre, I kinda feel like your skills got held back a bit but none the less great job… I’ll vote MV this time because in terms of horror and in terms of the complex bars he created through horror gave a very slight edge imo because I was also leaning on miracle side but I’ve made up my mind
MV WINS 5-2