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LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 10
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MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
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Word, 10.
I'm 3-1 @God of War
Let's drop early
You know it, good luck.
I look back with a good laugh, rooks jacked Rid's crown.
And now I'm battling Shar Pei? Watch me put that bitch down.
Your peak is looming kid, with weak defeats & booty wins..
Proving you're a Mir peasant to everybody in this league including him.
Every concept is aged. Not just played, you'll often copy it.
If you use Current Events, let me know which lake to toss your body in.
I think of Monster's Ball as a drama that got awards, hyped up...
You thought of Monster's Ball and jumped on God of War's right nut.
I know you'd like to see me, but you're quite an easy lunch.
The only fool from Penn State who can't even write a decent punch.
da 1 week wondah
undefeated streak to blown champ match. your act's pure fronting
shit, that shocking turnaround makes Paul George's dunk look like nothing
you built yourself up, but its obvious youre a fuckin dimwit
been blowin so much smoke Kraven Moorbud's pissed youre stealing his gimmick
you dress up old concepts and catch dumbasses off guard. thats a fact, queer
dunno what dudes is goin 'oh' 4... all your flips were done to death by that year
n those personals are so fake. quit being such a major fag
youve taken enough shots in the dark to be the world champ of lasertag
actin like I AM THE BEST IN THE LEAGUE. yeah... we doubt it, mac.
we just nod n say 'Sher, man'... but even he'd tell you that ego's outta whack
best of luck rid
@God of War we up
I look back with a good laugh, rooks jacked Rid's crown.
And now I'm battling Shar Pei? Watch me put that bitch down.
Good hit
Your peak is looming kid, with weak defeats & booty wins..
Proving you're a Mir peasant to everybody in this league including him.
Another good hit
Every concept is aged. Not just played, you'll often copy it.
If you use Current Events, let me know which lake to toss your body in.
Ok hit
I think of Monster's Ball as a drama that got awards, hyped up...
You thought of Monster's Ball and jumped on God of War's right nut.
Lol good hit, great rhyme scheme too
I know you'd like to see me, but you're quite an easy lunch.
The only fool from Penn State who can't even write a decent punch.
Nah
Vs.....
undefeated streak to blown champ match. your act's pure fronting
shit, that shocking turnaround makes Paul George's dunk look like nothing
Lol good hit..
you built yourself up, but its obvious youre a fuckin dimwit
been blowin so much smoke Kraven Moorbud's pissed youre stealing his gimmick
Ah ok I guess
you dress up old concepts and catch dumbasses off guard. thats a fact, queer
dunno what dudes is goin 'oh' 4... all your flips were done to death by that year
Lol that's nice
n those personals are so fake. quit being such a major fag
youve taken enough shots in the dark to be the world champ of lasertag
Ok
actin like I AM THE BEST IN THE LEAGUE. yeah... we doubt it, mac.
we just nod n say 'Sher, man'... but even he'd tell you that ego's outta whack
Lol that's pretty good,
Well it was a good battle but I've seen Hella better shut from rid, still good verse but sharps shit was attacking harder,
Again close but sharp got this one
Vote sharp
Word, good luck to you too.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sharp Nine
@.Allen Knight. @miracle @Obnoxious @Skepto @joeboston @Switch. @Untold @Alphabet @Skully Hendrix @Bonkers @KnowP @Lawd @...Celph Taut
I look back with a good laugh, rooks jacked Rid's crown.
And now I'm battling Shar Pei? Watch me put that bitch down.
ok
Your peak is looming kid, with weak defeats & booty wins..
Proving you're a Mir peasant to everybody in this league including him.
No
Every concept is aged. Not just played, you'll often copy it.
If you use Current Events, let me know which lake to toss your body in.
ok
I think of Monster's Ball as a drama that got awards, hyped up...
You thought of Monster's Ball and jumped on God of War's right nut.
LOL ok
I know you'd like to see me, but you're quite an easy lunch.
The only fool from Penn State who can't even write a decent punch.
weak closer
VS
undefeated streak to blown champ match. your act's pure fronting
shit, that shocking turnaround makes Paul George's dunk look like nothing
no
you built yourself up, but its obvious youre a fuckin dimwit
been blowin so much smoke Kraven Moorbud's pissed youre stealing his gimmick
no
you dress up old concepts and catch dumbasses off guard. thats a fact, queer
dunno what dudes is goin 'oh' 4... all your flips were done to death by that year
ok
n those personals are so fake. quit being such a major fag
youve taken enough shots in the dark to be the world champ of lasertag
no
actin like I AM THE BEST IN THE LEAGUE. yeah... we doubt it, mac.
we just nod n say 'Sher, man'... but even he'd tell you that ego's outta whack
ok
Okay this battle was pretty good, Rid, you had a few decent punches and some good wordplay and so did sharp but each of you had some bad punches or concepts that weren't powerful enough.
V/ Rid
I look back with a good laugh, rooks jacked Rid's crown.
And now I'm battling Shar Pei? Watch me put that bitch down.
Decent name play, a little bit forced but this was a really decent opener1.5/2
Your peak is looming kid, with weak defeats & booty wins..
Proving you're a Mir peasant to everybody in this league including him.
decent, the mir nameplay didn't really win me over though1/2
Every concept is aged. Not just played, you'll often copy it.
If you use Current Events, let me know which lake to toss your body in.
Decent, but rivers tend to have currents and lakes not as much1/2
I think of Monster's Ball as a drama that got awards, hyped up...
You thought of Monster's Ball and jumped on God of War's right nut.
comedic aspect, decent punch1.5/2
I know you'd like to see me, but you're quite an easy lunch.
The only fool from Penn State who can't even write a decent punch.
Nice closer1.5/2
Rid you get a 6.5/10
undefeated streak to blown champ match. your act's pure fronting
shit, that shocking turnaround makes Paul George's dunk look like nothing
Well I don't watch basketball but this comparison gives off some decent imagery without having to explain your punch which is good, very nice opener2/2
you built yourself up, but its obvious youre a fuckin dimwit
been blowin so much smoke Kraven Moorbud's pissed youre stealing his gimmick
funny, decent punch1/2
you dress up old concepts and catch dumbasses off guard. thats a fact, queer
dunno what dudes is goin 'oh' 4... all your flips were done to death by that year
interesting concept, nice punch here imo1.5/2
n those personals are so fake. quit being such a major fag
youve taken enough shots in the dark to be the world champ of lasertag
decent concept the punch was iight1/2
actin like I AM THE BEST IN THE LEAGUE. yeah... we doubt it, mac.
we just nod n say 'Sher, man'... but even he'd tell you that ego's outta whack
Decent name plays here, overall good closer1.5/2
Sharp you get a 7/10
This was a very good battle, I could learn alot from both of you. I've got Sharp taking this though by a hair, he had a little bit harder of a punch than Rid in the opener, overall this was so close but I think the opener is what did it for me. Good battle boys.
v/Sharp
Ridiculous
Your verse wasn't what I've come to expect from some one with your decorations. I did like your rhymes scheme in your gow's nut line. The rhyme scheme is the stuff of legends, but the punch itself was lackluster and kinda using gow's name to create a buzz. A lil cheap. The mir's peasant line was dope. You could have done soooo much with the Penn state concept. You dropped the ball. But it flowed nice which always fly far with me.
@Sharp Nine
Kraven moorbud line was dope. Laser tag line was dope.the rest you kinda phoned in. I've never read any of your verse before I don't think, so I don't know if this week is typical of your work. Idk if its indicative of your skill level, but you had shinier punches, which is why you won.
V/ @Sharp Nine
Good battle, dudes.
Mir, current events, monster ball
Vs.
04, lasertag, closer
Coo battle here both came with something current events was iight n monster ball was lol, sharp 04 was lol, lasertag was good feel rid edged it imo but it could go either way both came with some good shit, good battle
V/rid
I look back with a good laugh, rooks jacked Rid's crown.
And now I'm battling Shar Pei? Watch me put that bitch down.
Didn't like this one, came off statement'ish to me rather then a harsh diss.
Your peak is looming kid, with weak defeats & booty wins..
Proving you're a Mir peasant to everybody in this league including him.
Same as above.
Every concept is aged. Not just played, you'll often copy it.
If you use Current Events, let me know which lake to toss your body in.
This was kind of cool, think you could have expanded on it tho.
I think of Monster's Ball as a drama that got awards, hyped up...
You thought of Monster's Ball and jumped on God of War's right nut.
Eh... Kind of basic, IMO. Not seeing the real harshness behind this.
I know you'd like to see me, but you're quite an easy lunch.
The only fool from Penn State who can't even write a decent punch.
Kind of basic again, no real impact, IMO.
vs
undefeated streak to blown champ match. your act's pure fronting
shit, that shocking turnaround makes Paul George's dunk look like nothing
Not bad, wording could have been touched up on, but decent opener.
you built yourself up, but its obvious youre a fuckin dimwit
been blowin so much smoke Kraven Moorbud's pissed youre stealing his gimmick
Think you could have expanded on this. Came off statement'ish and no real harshness, IMO.
you dress up old concepts and catch dumbasses off guard. thats a fact, queer
dunno what dudes is goin 'oh' 4... all your flips were done to death by that year
This was a nice attack. Executed nicely, as well.
n those personals are so fake. quit being such a major fag
youve taken enough shots in the dark to be the world champ of lasertag
Not bad, once again.
actin like I AM THE BEST IN THE LEAGUE. yeah... we doubt it, mac.
we just nod n say 'Sher, man'... but even he'd tell you that ego's outta whack
Nah.
Overall, I've seen Rid drop some better shit, don't think he really applied himself here. Sharp was a little more consistent with some nice decent punches.
MVGT: Sharp - Just think his verses had more of an impact, IMO. Cool battle, guys.