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LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 4
10-20 lines
check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST
verses due FRIDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out. @Ridiculous @Capcom
In. Match whoever posts their verse 1st
Coo', hopefully you'll be cool with 16 max or less, 'cuz I got 1-2 and FL vs Kontext to write for as well.
Good luck, meng.
^ @Capcom
LOL @ Fresh Coastin'
You're the oldest of vets who no one respects. Folks can attest I think.
But word, you're a Fresh Coaster? At least I know where to rest my drink.
And don't worry about Ridiculous. I am NOT having a rough time.
It's YOU with the personal issues.. 'cuz they're all lacking a punchline.
Your statements are kind of void, no lines deployed are harming.
Go ahead and say I fled from Dad, but isn't that why you joined the army?
I'm 3-0, a man with no flaws. You're 3-1, a man with no draw..
Bragging about the Air Force when you couldn't even handle So, 'Com.
My lines got people talking. You aren't really shit with your bars.
Only way I see you Pulling the Upset is by dragging unwilling kids to your car.
I know you think we're born even, but this ain't YOUR season guy.
You may think you're dropping bombs, but I'd be shocked to C4 decent lines.
I'm taking your head. My blade is a threat and it's making a mess, fag..
'Bout to send all of your parts to God like you were making the next mag.
I really just outperformed. There's nothing witty about your form bud.
I'm still willing to hear you out.. but I'm only listening until the door shuts.
16
Beat Me for the title? Jedi You Must be out your Mind Trick
Lose to this fag? Doubt it, he quick to Laia dude down & Chewbacca fat dick
While Playin with his own Hans Solo, admit it, so sad it must be
To be known as the next Steve Carrol..40yrs old still holdin on to virginity
I'm bout to put an end to thee..You shall be merked, so why bother
Have you screamin stop it Dadi, cuz we all know how u've been sonned by The Great Father
Your girl I'm on her..Hittin her wit that big dick, Yeah Bitch it get's nasty
Bust so many Caps in her ass, had her holdin on to my rope screamin harder than the dude in ya Avy
You trash G, Overrated, Your punches are played..Flat out, have no fight bro
Verse of the Week? I think he meant "Verse of the Weak" shouts out to GoW's typo
You Dyke Hoe, No1 here fears your queer spits, best believe that's a fact
I know you thinkin' "that's Ridiculous!", so is everyone else cuz they already know u're wack
Act as if you earned that 3-0...you beat no1 worth mentioning I know u're ashamed
Don't believe me? Look at his avy..Why you think this pussy black'd out his name
You're Lame, GameOver kid you're dead here, ya chance for survival's lost
Rid could have a sniper Rifle aimed at this headliner & he still don't deserve a title shot
You're the oldest of vets who no one respects. Folks can attest I think.
But word, you're a Fresh Coaster? At least I know where to rest my drink.
My lines got people talking. You aren't really shit with your bars.
Only way I see you Pulling the Upset is by dragging unwilling kids to your car.
I know you think we're born even, but this ain't YOUR season guy.
You may think you're dropping bombs, but I'd be shocked to C4 decent lines.
I'm taking your head. My blade is a threat and it's making a mess, fag..
'Bout to send all of your parts to God like you were making the next mag.
Vs
Beat Me for the title? Jedi You Must be out your Mind Trick
Lose to this fag? Doubt it, he quick to Laia dude down & Chewbacca fat dick
Your girl I'm on her..Hittin her wit that big dick, Yeah Bitch it get's nasty
Bust so many Caps in her ass, had her holdin on to my rope screamin harder than the dude in ya Avy
Cool battle. I think rid took this pretty easily in my eyes. Came with the much stronger verse concept wise, personal wise and witty wise too. I feel like his lines were executed a lot better than cap's and just a lot more consistent. Cap had a couple of cool bars but felt like his punches weren't hitting hard enough in general and the lack of flowing multis impacted on the punches. Was a little disappointing to see cap refer to rid's avi twice as well as the closing line about the title shot considering this is a contenders match, just felt like you were running out of ideas and lacking creativity. Good luck to both though.
V/rid
You're the oldest of vets who no one respects. Folks can attest I think.
But word, you're a Fresh Coaster? At least I know where to rest my drink.
And don't worry about Ridiculous. I am NOT having a rough time.
It's YOU with the personal issues.. 'cuz they're all lacking a punchline.
Your statements are kind of void, no lines deployed are harming.
Go ahead and say I fled from Dad, but isn't that why you joined the army?
I'm 3-0, a man with no flaws. You're 3-1, a man with no draw..
Bragging about the Air Force when you couldn't even handle So, 'Com.
My lines got people talking. You aren't really shit with your bars.
Only way I see you Pulling the Upset is by dragging unwilling kids to your car.
vs
Beat Me for the title? Jedi You Must be out your Mind Trick
Lose to this fag? Doubt it, he quick to Laia dude down & Chewbacca fat dick
You trash G, Overrated, Your punches are played..Flat out, have no fight bro
Verse of the Week? I think he meant "Verse of the Weak" shouts out to GoW's typo
Act as if you earned that 3-0...you beat no1 worth mentioning I know u're ashamed
Don't believe me? Look at his avy..Why you think this pussy black'd out his name
^^I thought this was nice. with the Mention. Blacked out name wordplay
well...Ridiculous had a fuckin monster verse off the gate and was pretty much consistant throught out until like the last 6 lines. Loved the personals and harsh wording. So,com personal issues. & fled from dad. army concept was nice. on top of that cap dropped a dad punch so the impact was more.
Capcom. as always you dropped good this week. BUT I wanna say this verse was more statementish to me. the ending of your punches were worded sort of bland IMO. instead of harsh and direct like usual. & it took away from the sting
vote-Rid
Kudos bitches
Ridiculous
You're the oldest of vets who no one respects. Folks can attest I think.
But word, you're a Fresh Coaster? At least I know where to rest my drink.
decent opner 1.5/3
And don't worry about Ridiculous. I am NOT having a rough time.
It's YOU with the personal issues.. 'cuz they're all lacking a punchline.
ight keep it goin 1.5/3
Your statements are kind of void, no lines deployed are harming.
Go ahead and say I fled from Dad, but isn't that why you joined the army?
mmmm ok 1.5/3
I'm 3-0, a man with no flaws. You're 3-1, a man with no draw..
Bragging about the Air Force when you couldn't even handle So, 'Com.
2.5/3 feelin it.
My lines got people talking. You aren't really shit with your bars.
Only way I see you Pulling the Upset is by dragging unwilling kids to your car
lol ok 2/3
I know you think we're born even, but this ain't YOUR season guy.
You may think you're dropping bombs, but I'd be shocked to C4 decent lines.
nice punch 2/3
I'm taking your head. My blade is a threat and it's making a mess, fag..
'Bout to send all of your parts to God like you were making the next mag.
damn 2/3
I really just outperformed. There's nothing witty about your form bud.
I'm still willing to hear you out.. but I'm only listening until the door shuts.
lol 1/3
13/24
Beat Me for the title? Jedi You Must be out your Mind Trick
Lose to this fag? Doubt it, he quick to Laia dude down & Chewbacca fat dick
could of been worded better tbh, i liked the concept 1.5/3
While Playin with his own Hans Solo, admit it, so sad it must be
To be known as the next Steve Carrol..40yrs old still holdin on to virginity
,5/3 statement. wack
I'm bout to put an end to thee..You shall be merked, so why bother
Have you screamin stop it Dadi, cuz we all know how u've been sonned by The Great Father
keep dadis dick out ur mouth .aready damn. so played out .already 2/3
Your girl I'm on her..Hittin her wit that big dick, Yeah Bitch it get's nasty
Bust so many Caps in her ass, had her holdin on to my rope screamin harder than the dude in ya Avy
1.5/3 ok ok ok
You trash G, Overrated, Your punches are played..Flat out, have no fight bro
Verse of the Week? I think he meant "Verse of the Weak" shouts out to GoW's typo
1.5/3
You Dyke Hoe, No1 here fears your queer spits, best believe that's a fact
I know you thinkin' "that's Ridiculous!", so is everyone else cuz they already know u're wack
funny factor here 1.5/3
Act as if you earned that 3-0...you beat no1 worth mentioning I know u're ashamed
Don't believe me? Look at his avy..Why you think this pussy black'd out his name
nice personal 1.5/3
You're Lame, GameOver kid you're dead here, ya chance for survival's lost
Rid could have a sniper Rifle aimed at this headliner & he still don't deserve a title shot
could of finished stronger tbh. didnt hit hard . read it again. 1/3
12/24
overal....i had to give it to the first guy. fairs in. line by line break down. more b/d if needed, lmk asap.
Fresh coaster, personal issues, so com, upset, army
Vs.
Gow typo, blacked out name
Coo battle both came with something but rid took control personals fresh coaster lls, personal issue was good, upset lls, so com n army lol, cap gow typo was lol, n blacked out name was lls just rid was more consistent n hit harder
V/ rid
You're the oldest of vets who no one respects. Folks can attest I think.
But word, you're a Fresh Coaster? At least I know where to rest my drink.
And don't worry about Ridiculous. I am NOT having a rough time.
It's YOU with the personal issues.. 'cuz they're all lacking a punchline.
Your statements are kind of void, no lines deployed are harming.
Go ahead and say I fled from Dad, but isn't that why you joined the army?
I'm 3-0, a man with no flaws. You're 3-1, a man with no draw..
Bragging about the Air Force when you couldn't even handle So, 'Com.
I'm taking your head. My blade is a threat and it's making a mess, fag..
'Bout to send all of your parts to God like you were making the next mag.
vs.
You trash G, Overrated, Your punches are played..Flat out, have no fight bro
Verse of the Week? I think he meant "Verse of the Weak" shouts out to GoW's typo
You're Lame, GameOver kid you're dead here, ya chance for survival's lost
Rid could have a sniper Rifle aimed at this headliner & he still don't deserve a title shot
Ridiculous killed it here. capcom had some decent concepts but wording was off.
v/ rid
Rid
You're the oldest of vets who no one respects. Folks can attest I think.
But word, you're a Fresh Coaster? At least I know where to rest my drink.
And don't worry about Ridiculous. I am NOT having a rough time.
It's YOU with the personal issues.. 'cuz they're all lacking a punchline.
Your statements are kind of void, no lines deployed are harming.
Go ahead and say I fled from Dad, but isn't that why you joined the army?
I'm 3-0, a man with no flaws. You're 3-1, a man with no draw..
Bragging about the Air Force when you couldn't even handle So, 'Com.
My lines got people talking. You aren't really shit with your bars.
Only way I see you Pulling the Upset is by dragging unwilling kids to your car.
I know you think we're born even, but this ain't YOUR season guy.
You may think you're dropping bombs, but I'd be shocked to C4 decent lines.
I'm taking your head. My blade is a threat and it's making a mess, fag..
'Bout to send all of your parts to God like you were making the next mag.
VS.
CAP
Beat Me for the title? Jedi You Must be out your Mind Trick
Lose to this fag? Doubt it, he quick to Laia dude down & Chewbacca fat dick
You trash G, Overrated, Your punches are played..Flat out, have no fight bro
Verse of the Week? I think he meant "Verse of the Weak" shouts out to GoW's typo
You Dyke Hoe, No1 here fears your queer spits, best believe that's a fact
I know you thinkin' "that's Ridiculous!", so is everyone else cuz they already know u're wack
Act as if you earned that 3-0...you beat no1 worth mentioning I know u're ashamed
Don't believe me? Look at his avy..Why you think this pussy black'd out his name
Well Rid came with consistency throughout his whole verse except his closer. I felt he had personals overall humor factor the GOD/Mag line was pretty rough like I said very direct hit and lotb in my opinion. Cap had a creative opener with the Wordplay and couple personal flips. he attempted with the personals continuous which is good but sting factor wise just wasn't there.
V/Rid
Probably one of the best battles I've seen on RB in a while. Reminds me of the good ole days. Alright, let's get to it. Rid's verse was packed with good puns, personals and clever wordplay. Didn't see an offbeat to his attack. He was very concise and smart about how he used his puns and the quality of it showed. Capcom's verse was reminiscent of this. Really nice display of witty material and humor, with good execution and form. However, where I felt Capcom fell was a few of his lines were long-winded or didn't pack much of an impact. It's still better than a lot of the stuff I see on RB regularly. So the tldr version of this would be Rid's verse was more polished and stronger on attack. Cap's verse can hold its own against many here, but with Rid's effort, it was easier to find the flaws.
Vote - Rid
somebody smack the shit out this nigga for voting on a closed battle