"Please don't love me"

A response to a poem she wrote for me. I'd share her poem to give a better insight into mines but I don't think she'd appreciate that.


Honey bee,
secluded delicacy;
I've searched you
felt you
dwelled
and have
found too many reasons
to graciously
reject your request
and keep loving you.
I'm neither hero nor coward
but I don't make promises
that I cannot keep.
And to me,
every time
that I say
those three words
I'm making a thousand
devoted promises.
I want to get lost in your labyrinth.
I want to meet your monsters,
I want to go through every door,
I want to swim in your veins
and find myself in your heart.
I swear I see Elysium at your every step,
so how can one say that the journey isn't worth it?
If I were to let you go now
Overcast would
smother
the morning light.
Gorgeous pieces,
shining fragments,
you are too much
for them to understand.
Maybe your past lovers
didn't know
how to arrange a mosaic;
you need care
thought
bravery
a gentle hand
and enough honesty
to know that you
are a masterpiece
that has yet to be finished.
When I read your words
I amiably oblige
to your honesty
inspired by love.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ty-356177.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ow-356248.html

very dope and emotional piece. reading it just
hurt my eyes going back and forth so damn much.
LOL. but still you did a great job, man.. and i bet
she really enoyed this as well.. good work..
sorry the feed is so short but im in a rush..
gotta go and pick my daughter up from daycare.

i enjoyed your narrative approach on this. i am left in awe after reading the swim in your veins, and end in your heart lines. Great piece.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...xn-357783.html
Twixn & Cry... The People's Politics < hit on that beast.





pretty weird love poem... so this was a response to a love poem wrote to you? I couldn't tell whether or not you loved her or if you were telling her that you didn't love her and she shouldn't love you... it was weird because there's a lot of areas in there saying how much you care and how much you enjoy her... then there were some areas like... I dunno, almost the opposite or hinting towards the opposite. very open piece... seems quickly done, but a good read no doubt. keep up man... and hit up mine and twix's ish....