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Top notch...
Made best, deepend by thought n related to scheme...
Perfection made it a dream, when realitys makin ya fiend...
Like paste in the seam, or wasten supreme its not basic...
Mistakes erased quick... Its lookin at you but u cant face it...
Not messin up, always confessed n stuck, but overcome....
Theres no second or third place, Theres only one......
~a~perfect~shot~....Ya~surface~top....notch....
Others wait below..under u, while u cop squats....
Its like trying to stop glocks, while there ~Under~the~aim~...
Or dancing ~under~the~rain~..Only created right under the brain..
Its there...ur ability..sometimes it makes nervouse...
But always remember forever, practice makes perfect....
just a quick keystyle.....peace
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You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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uppin...? feedback? not feelin it?
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All Right Drop.
Second Verse Was Garbage.
Looks Like You Was Just Throwing Out Shit.
Some Didn't Even Sense.
Keep Elevatin.
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thanks bro.... i could use critisism.... everyone can peace...
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no more freepostin... this is open mic ... u need a comment or a verse... peace
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I liked the rhyming for this. Simple verse, put your concepts to a written and you'll have a more complete piece. Some alright vocab in there, keep that up. Keep practicing your rhyming, and you'll flow longer.
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