this haunting dream

This is my least expected,
Anticipated decline of the year.
Where im stuck alone
And you,
Your nowhere near.
The wounds, they've healed
with slight signs of infections.
Now memories, they've become dreams.
Haunting, teasing, desending to
the rocky bottom as broken cliffes.
Hanging around, as if my heart where,
the local corner store where we first met.
Still seperated by the miles inbetween.
These two lonely hearts,
perhaps just mine
Your so much stronger
I dred that your,
Your doing just fine.
Which, gives me peace in mind
But lonelt hearts never lie,
neither does mine in drunken emotions.
I'm here, ready to open up.
Tell all that i always wanted too say
Don't turn and run, wont you stay
forever seems like just today.
It's been said, Life is just a
Heartbeat in heaven.
So for every minuet i feel alone,
could be just an hour with you.
God i wish for
Just an hour with you,
You, You, You
Do you know how beautiful
Your eyes, smile, personality above all
they seem.
Will this ever be more
Than just this haunting dream.

shit ain never get read aye

uppin the last time

hey yo..im feelin it.
Took me some time to get at it, but i am getting my green off the ears, since I been afk for a few years. Its sucks hopping in and out.
I peeped it, and i truly liked it.
And I knwo the feelin when you got an emotion u want to spit out..awaiting that up?
Heres that up u were waitin on playa...keep up those skills.
I had a mtv video feel..with some typical heartbreak shit,but then..FLASH...some REAL emotion flows in..disregarding teh norm. I liekd that attack. The emotion was set. Werd. AMen to those g-damned Haunting dreams.
Ive had my bouts.

ty man

Alright, the opener was probably my favorite part of this because it had an awesome flow and it really set a mellow kind of mood. I also like the short simple lines that portray that raw emotion. I also liked this part a lot

These two lonely hearts,
perhaps just mine
Your so much stronger
I dred that your,
Your doing just fine.
Which, gives me peace in mind
But lonelt hearts never lie,

^really nice
anyway overall nice drop
keep at it