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White Boy Within
Ayo...
fuck the bullshit i was put here for one reason,
to settle the score with god and make people believen,
it the fact that, maybe im not not wack,
maybe im a lost soul trying to find my way back,
or fuck up kid who fell off the train track,
and some say it a same i act,
as if i got no sense, cuz i grew up in the ghetto,
and i like rap, fuck hevey metal,
i put my foot to the petal,
and life life in the fast lane,
looking for another person in life to blame,
like my porol officer, my mom or my dad,
none of them saw the train wreck ahead,
none of them knew the presser from kin,
now i got to find my white boy within.
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Thats quite good bigkountry its quite poetic the way it describes yourself (if thats who its supposed to describe) keep it up!
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You need to leave a link to a open mic that you left decent feedback to or this gets closed, Thanks.
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yo i left postive feedback to this one its by my man Tha 1 hot track i thought
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this sucked pretty bad....you need to find the suicidalist within and kill urself...
peace
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yo rapid fire you need to find a dick and suck it
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yo i dunno what to say kid, dam this whole shit was wack to the mack
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work on structure and vocab to deliver a better piece, i don't know...just keep tryin to raise your game.
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yeah this shit does suck ass i agree but any ways i have elevated my game bu twho knows
