Modest illusions.

Lenox- Modest illusions
Can't settle for oblivion,
Cause the death trembles in the millions,
The minion of killing is set for the civilians,
Come to reject the headless prince who was said to be brilliant,
Wasn't prepared to believe the fools but the demons seem to bleed the truth,
Feast upon the weeping and let the legions loose,
Raping my thoughts as the cancer hums it's toon,
Anger in my devilish manner, evil will be among us soon,
Bang my head on the table, throw my memories in the dungeon of doom,
The world revolves around my pain that's why it's always dark when it rains,
The loud dog barks in my soul but I'm scarred and insane,
Abortions forming as the orphans get tortured and cry,
Formalizing the former lie cause I was a mistake born to try,
Issues in the world capitalizing my visions,
Act wise with the wisdom that I was obviously given,
God is a modest Odessy to what we are livin,
So I'm stuck in the middle trying to justify what we are missinhttp://tapatalk.imageshack.com/v2/14...5ad1407b8c.jpg

okay first off i sdont know what the image has to do with it. its an all good image with a messed up side think which i think looks cool. and badly cropped on the other side with your name slapped up the top. which hmm i do actually like that typefont.

anyway. The main driving point on your written work is the scheme, you have a solid scheme throughout. Id say you got solid imagry too. Not much bad i find with your work, i like it. cool stuff. Just keep working on it.

Thanks brother good looks